The Sky

The sky today reflected his mood. Cold, deary and gloomy.

The sky today reflected his mood. Bright and delighted with clouds moving to the beat.

The sky today reflected his life. A fiery blaze, now subdued in a web of darkness.


The photo prompt has been given by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields at the Friday Fictioneers and the word prompt (Move) has been given for the Six Sentence Stories hosted by Denise Farley.

21 responses to “The Sky”

  1. Hopefully, a contented darkness

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  2. And now, she doesn’t have to contend with his mood of the day…

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    1. But the sky will still remind her of it 🙂

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  3. Very poetic, but I’m worried about him with that last stanza. Well done!

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    1. I guess the sun set on his life 🙂

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    Perhaps he needs to become a submariner,

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    1. Maybe not, what if the water too mimicked his moods 🤷🏻‍♀️

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  5. Oh, I like where you took this. Short and not so sweet, but just enough.

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  6. Such contrasts. I like how you’ve used repetition and rhythm in this.

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    1. It was fun 😀 Started with a longing for clear blue skies on a deary rainy day 😦

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  7. Poetic. Interesting idea about the sky reflecting his moods.

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  8. I love a suny, blue-sky day. But I also love clouds and storms. Am I bipolar? 🙂

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    1. I guess they both have their charms 🤷🏻‍♀️

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  9. May the sky stay bright and delightful.

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