Electricity

The yellow glow stood out like a shower of flowers against the darkened sky as his boat drew near. He carefully stood up, balancing, as the sea gently nudged the stern.

A quick throw and he fastened them both to the towering pillar at the bottom of the bridge. With practiced hands, he wiped away the seaweed and grime that regularly caught on. The rusted outlet still had its use as he plugged in a portable battery pack.

Tonight, a poor neighbourhood would shine like the stars.


The photo prompt has been given by Sandra Crook at the Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields and the word prompt (Outlet) has been given for the Six Sentence Stories hosted by Denise Farley.

31 responses to “Electricity”

  1. What an original take!

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  2. Ah lovely. A clever idea.

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  3. Dear Bernadette,

    Atmospheric piece. I could feel it as well as see it.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  4. Wonderful act of generosity to light up the bridge for others to enjoy.

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  5. I liked “Light like a shower of flowers.” Imaginative way to connect the two prompts. I do have a question: Who or what is the “both” that he fastened to the pillar?

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    1. He and the boat 🙂 Can’t have either floating away.

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  6. Splendid! I love the idea of this.

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  7. Lovely story with a great last line.

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  8. A very encouraging story about giving!

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  9. The MC knows their territory well, including what his neighbors need. Well-written and I like the small details that bring it to life.

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    1. I glad it turned out well 🙂 I do love (getting ideas for and) writing atmospheric pieces.

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  10. This is a delightfully different take on the prompt. Kudos!

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  11. What a clever idea. I love the description of bridge and boat, it almost felt like being there with him.

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    1. That was the intention 😀

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