Micro Fiction, Colossal Ideas.
“Stretch! Just a little bit more. Still a few minutes before she arrives.”
“I’m trying… but it’s out of reach. It would’ve been easier to break them out of a vault.”
“Susie, Dan, leave those toys alone.”
The photo prompt has been given by Brenda Cox at the Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields and the word prompt (Consequences) has been given for the Six Sentence Stories hosted by Denise Farley.
Busted!
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🙈
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Two in one, nice Bernadette. Thank you.
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Good try guys! A lovely little tale, Bernadette.
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Thank you 🙂
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A whole story in just a few words! Well done 🙂
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When I read the last line, Pink Floyd’s “Another Brick in the Wall” played in my ear. 🙂
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Assuming the mother is not keeping a sharper eye next time
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I can see the kids reaching in vain trying to heist these hoisted toys.
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So close yet so far…
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Wondering what would prompt the Other to hid ed the toys in that way. These kids are trouble? 🤗
Clever take on a two-fer.
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They can’t wait to get their “friends” back. I usually had to sneak in order to wash my kids toys and their favorite blanket. Lovely story!
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I bet this Mom had to too 🙂
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at least, you can’t blame them for trying. 🙂
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Nice presentation of a child’s perspective where their mother is the horizon of their world.
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You left this mom giggling!
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😀
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A story which I enjoyed.
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Glad to hear 🙂
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Mothers have eyes in the back of their head 😉
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You can always rely on them…
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Hahah, that was cute and clever, well combined prompts.
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Thank you 🙂
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