That’s Not Fair

“That one looks like a bird, one point for me.”

“That one looks like a circle, one point for me too.”

“That looks like an arrow.”

“Which one?”

“That one over there.”

“No it isn’t, it would be if the distance between both clouds wasn’t so much; minus one for you.”

“That’s not fair.”


The photo prompt has been given by Na’ama Yehuda at the Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields and the word prompt (Distance) has been given by Denise Farley at the Girlie on the Edge.

Happy New Year Everyone 🙂 May 2021 be better than 2020.

34 responses to “That’s Not Fair”

  1. Dear Bernadette,

    I’ve looked at clouds from both sides now…Love the dialogue. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  2. Clouds are cool, and we all see something different.
    I remember in Peanuts when Linus sees sculptures and biblical scenes and poor ol’ Chuck sees duckies!

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  3. Being the umpire is a guaranteed win

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  4. It was worth a shot. Stewards enquiry required!

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  5. They’ll be seeing “clouds in their coffee” soon enough. Nice dialogue!

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  6. Ah, the days of watching the stories unfold in the clouds… can’t wait until spring so I can play again! 🙂 ❤ Happy New Year!

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  7. Nice take on the prompt. You capture the pre-teen angst of the competitors very well.

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  8. Cloud judge has to be the toughest job in the world. Nice take on the prompt. Happy Holidays!

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  9. Good dialogue. Happy New Year!

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  10. Love this. Such a peaceful SSS. I was almost there looking up at the clouds.

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  11. Oh, so that’s what ‘scored in the cloud’ means. 😉

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  12. Reminds me of lying on the grass in summer – a good thought to warm up the depths of winter!

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  13. Timely and fun Six, Bernadette. Was “cloud watching” just yesterday!
    Happy New Year!!

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  14. Hey – echo the above but hope we don’t have to wait until May? 🤣

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  15. agree with Rochelle, excellent job of a Six entirely of dialogue… (I struggle with the ‘positioning’ of dialogue and maintaining the individual voices)
    Nice

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  16. Wishing you a happy and wonderful New Year 2021.

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  17. In the end, it’s what you win that matters…so choose wisely? Lol…
    Let’s all choose a happier New Year. That’s something we can all agree on!

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  18. It’s been too long since i’ve spent time looking at clouds. Nice dialog.

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  19. Ah cloud watching. The world needs to do more of it.

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    1. The world needs a clearer view of the sky for that

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  20. Excellent Six. Cloud gazing is a such a joy.

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  21. Lovely six. Love to cloud gaze.

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  22. Lovely six, lovely story!

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  23. I love cloud gazing- but subtracting points for another’s imagination…. harsh! Enjoyed!

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    1. Well that’s how the game’s played

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