Bernadette Braganza

Playful Pocket-sized Plots.

WEP: Get In!

Sam: (Shaking his head vigorously) No I won’t!

Mother: Why not?

Sam: It’s too deep. I’ll sink.

Mother: Oh come on, Sam. It’s not that deep. See even little Peter got in.

Sam: He probably never knew. At least give me a lifejacket first.

Mother: (With an exasperated sigh) Sam, will you just get into the bathtub before the water gets cold.

G for Get In!

PS: This also happens to be one of my favourite posts which is why I decided to repost it 🙂

Read other stories in the challenge here:

A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Word Count 62: FCA – Preferred (Though all kinds of comments are welcome)

The February 2018 WEP Challenge: In Too Deep

Click here to know more.

Bernadette Braganza

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30 responses to “WEP: Get In!”

  1. desk49 Avatar
    desk49

    Short but cute
    LOL
    It did say 1000 words or less

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  2. Denise Covey Avatar
    Denise Covey

    Hi Bernedette. Lovely to meet you. Love this little play script with its twist at the end. So cute. Thanks for joining the WEP challenge. It’s so great to have our first playscript!

    I’m not sure you’ll get too many comments as I spent a long time working out how to do it, then I hit on the idea of the date. Have had that before.

    Thanks again for joining us! And for coming by to comment on my post.

    Denise

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  3. nidhi Avatar
    nidhi

    Too cute and brought a big smile 🙂

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  4. Olga Godim Avatar
    Olga Godim

    LOL. Wonderful, simply wonderful! Short and to the point. A little gem of a story.

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  5. Kalpanaa Avatar
    Kalpanaa

    Hi Bernadette – I’m popping over after submitting my entry to the WEP challenge. I enjoyed your teeny tiny story. It was soooo difficult to comment – I don’t think there is an option on your blog.

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    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Hi Kalpanaa, Thanks for taking the effort in figuring out the comment part. Will try to fix it the next time.

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  6. Nilanjana Bose Avatar
    Nilanjana Bose

    Cute microflash! Great to meet you here at the WEP.

    It took me ages to figure out how to comment.

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    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Sorry about the comment issue, will try to fix it next time. Thanks for commenting though.

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  7. patgarcia Avatar
    patgarcia

    I am laughing at your very cool ending. At first, I thought they were at a swimming pool or he was getting to dive into a large body of water, but then found out it was the bathtub. Great ingenuity. Just love it.
    Shalom aleichem,
    Pat G

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    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Thanks Pat

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  8. Yolanda Renee Avatar
    Yolanda Renee

    Lovely and fun! Yes, a true gem of an entry. Thank you. Love that you’re new to the WEP. Great short!

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    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Thanks Yolanda

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  9. Deborah Drucker Avatar
    Deborah Drucker

    Very cute. Not sure at first how deep the water was, like a swimming pool, or if there truly could be danger.

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    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      That was the plan: to give the story a slight twist/surprise ending

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  10. hilarymb Avatar
    hilarymb

    Hi Bernadette – well done .. such fun – and I thought there was going to be a lot more to the story line … but yes in too deep – he wanted to be sure he was safe … and that exasperation in his mother’s voice. Lovely – cheers Hilary

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    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Thanks Hilary

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  11. Pat Hatt Avatar
    Pat Hatt

    haha worries that need not be. Kids are fun indeed. Great little snippet.

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      Bernadette Braganza

      Thanks Pat

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  12. dolorah at Book Lover Avatar
    dolorah at Book Lover

    ha, kids!

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  13. L.G. Keltner Avatar
    L.G. Keltner

    This was so cute! I remember a time when my kids were this way about bath time.

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  14. Deepa Duraisamy Avatar
    Deepa Duraisamy

    That was funny! Cheeky humour comes out well in posts! 🙂

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    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Thanks Deepa. Nice to see you enjoyed it.

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  16. Iain Kelly Avatar
    Iain Kelly

    Haha I recognise this scene from bath time at my house! 🙂

    G IS FOR GLASGOW, GREAT BRITAIN

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  17. #Queen Avatar
    #Queen

    Such a cute read

    Tongue Twister for G

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      Bernadette Braganza

      Thanks #Queen

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