A Gift for Santa

Christmas was coming. Stephen sighed, another day in the bitter cold. He put on his Santa hat and zipped up his suit as he took his position near the lamppost; waving cheerfully to passersby while humming a tune.

The entire day passed with the usual “Ho ho ho, you had better been good this year,” many selfies, and tons of wishlists from kids. Evening came and as he got ready to leave, a child approached him. He stood waiting to take the custom ‘Selfie with Santa’ that kids always wanted; the child held up a plate of chips, “A small gift for the one who brings me toys every year.”


The photo prompts have been given by Sandra Crook at the Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields and Yarnspinnerr at the Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (FFfAW). The word prompt (tune) has been given by Six Sentence Stories by Recording Life Under The Radar.

 

31 responses to “A Gift for Santa”

  1. An unexpected and sweet ending

    Like

    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Thanks Neil

      Like

  2. I love surprises

    Like

    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Me too!

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Such a kind thought. Nicely done.

    Like

    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Thank you Sandra

      Like

  4. A very nice end. We can all be Santa in our way, can’t we?

    Like

    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Yes!

      Like

  5. That was such a sweet story. Well done.

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

    Like

    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Thank you Susan

      Like

  6. What a sweet gesture!

    Like

    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      That’s the beauty of Christmas 🙂

      Like

  7. He can be assured of Santa’s generosity this year! Delightful.

    Click to read my Six!

    Like

    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Sure thing Keith

      Like

  8. Very ice Six! Just a little twist to the ending and very pleasant surprise.

    Like

    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Thanks Clark

      Like

  9. Now that child will go far in the world of human relations.

    Liked by 1 person

  10. I bet that made Santa’s day! It’s always a thrill when someone expresses gratitude unexpectedly. Nice story; lovely concept.

    Like

    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Thanks Penny

      Like

  11. Awwe, so cute. And smart concatenation of the two challenges 🙂

    Like

    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Thanks Anurag

      Liked by 1 person

  12. Impressive. A lovely tale that satisfies both the prompts.

    Like

    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      The prompts were great as well 🙂

      Like

  13. Awww, what a thoughtful child 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  14. A very kind gesture. You story touches an emotional chord. Nicely done.

    Like

    1. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
      Bernadette Braganza

      Thanks Neel

      Like

  15. A very sweet Christrmas story! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Very sweet… so glad for the kid to be able to put a smile on the face of Santa.

    Liked by 1 person

Leave a reply to messymimi Cancel reply



Other posts you may be interested in…

Create a website or blog at WordPress.com

Design a site like this with WordPress.com
Get started